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8/3/2017 2 Comments

Short Story Review: Two Approaches

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I read two stories this week involving tales of infidelity, and its consequences. The authors dealt with the same topic in very different ways. They provide good examples of how every story has been told, in a thematic sense, but authors can still bring fresh views to those themes.

Serious Damage, by Cathryn Grant, almost had a Poe-like quality, as the reader learns about two women competing for the same man. Or are they? Melinda learns that coworker Caroline has a reputation for being delusional. "She's in her own world," other coworkers say of Caroline. When Caroline drops the bombshell that she's having an affair with Melinda's boyfriend, Melinda doesn't believe her. The storytelling is in the moment, emotionally intimate, and from Melinda's somewhat unreliable point of view. 

The Magnolia Murders, by O'Neil De Noux, involves infidelity in the past tense. In fact, the story is told as a flashback, opening with a question, telling the story, and ending where it began - with an answer to the question. Wealthy businessman Franklin Fortesque VII is running for governor. He hires private detective Lucien Caye to solve two murders, and thus clear the path for his campaign. The problem is, the deceased are Fortesque's wife and her lover. In this story, the narrator is emotionally removed from the infidelity. He sympathizes with the star-crossed lovers. The case appears to have no solution, until Caye interviews the only witnesses, a stuttering little girl clutching a kitten, and Elvira the Goat Lady.

Good storytelling can take a well-used theme and make it fresh. Both authors succeeded with these stories.

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8/3/2017 01:25:12 pm

Thanks for the review. And for spelling my name and Lucien Caye correctly. Had another review that changed his last name to Kaye. I also liked Cathryn Grant's story.

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Catherine Dilts
8/3/2017 01:34:53 pm

With a last name like Dilts, I am a little sensitive about spelling names correctly. I've been called Ditz too many times! And my maiden name wasn't any easier. I enjoyed your story. I was really worried about the choice Lucien had to make. Now I'm wondering what will happen next.

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