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10/4/2017 4 Comments

Short Story Review: Cabin Fever

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Cabin Fever by David Edgerley Gates, Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine September / October 2017

Deputy Hector Moody's truck breaks down in the Montana wilderness. A storm is coming. His day goes from bad to worse when he takes shelter in an old cabin, and encounters two escaped convicts. Then lightning strikes, and the forest fire erupts. Author Gates does a terrific job of making these events seem plausible. The tension builds as firefighters converge on the forest fire, while a SWAT team hunts for both Deputy Moody and the convicts.

Gates breaks one of the rules of short story writing, and does it well. The common advice is to not switch point of view in a short story. This is true, unless you are a skilled storyteller. Cabin Fever is told from multiple points of view. One character is Deputy Moody's girlfriend, Doctor Katie Faraday, who sets up a clinic to treat the firefighters for minor injuries and smoke inhalation. 

     "Hector's over in the Gallatin," she told him. "Ranch hands at the Two Forks called in suspicious rustling activity."
     The ranchers ran cattle on federal land, under permit. The cows ranged fairly wide, and sometimes you lost track.
     "Well, we've got a thing," Frank Child said.
     Katie knew what cops meant by a "thing." It didn't usually presage good news.


There is a lot going on in this story, told with edge-of-your-seat intensity. 

4 Comments
Robert Lopresti link
10/4/2017 07:51:26 am

Good review. Good story, too.

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Catherine Dilts
10/4/2017 08:26:36 am

I have enjoyed every story in this issue of AHMM so far, and look forward to reading the rest.

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donna conrady
10/4/2017 08:07:22 am

Two great things as a reader--the emotional investment in the story and its characters--and that part of me outside the story admiring the writer's amazing skill. (-:

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Catherine Dilts
10/4/2017 08:28:12 am

I agree! I love reading stories that are so well written, you can't stop turning the pages, and then are disappointed when it ends.

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